My goal for this essay, and also what I see as my biggest challenge, is to mainly work on the flow of my thesis and integrate my two ideas better within my essay as a whole. Sometimes I don’t know if my thesis is to broad or to narrow but I feel like I have a good middle ground for this essay overall, and would simply like to change up the wording to correlate better with my ideas. I also want to work on introducing the authors better, as well as cutting down on my paper as whole, making sure its not repetitive.

The steps I will take to achieve this goal is to re-read my essay, write down the main points I’m making within the paragraphs, and then see if I can integrate it in my thesis. I will also try to get rid of not-so important information to make it less dragged-out, along with doing research on the authors so I can incorporate it within my text. When revising my essay and I am confronted with a challenge, I will use my resources of my professor, and the students/peers around me. I also have the internet to assist me on little, quick-fix problems.